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none(humans at checkouts dipping, unloads!)

some(polyglots have run-ins, as skylarks - unloads)

plenty(zealots make pass-ups the spines; shafts)
many(hands make lights work and switches offroad)

all(death after hand-outs, writes columns, triggers)
scarcity(maggots are fed-up, whines then laughs)

any(breath on lip-pouts make solemns sniggers)

one(health cause spouts, and indices go in figures)









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1. January 17th 2007 @ 02:41. Lily Says:
code?...

scarcity(maggots are fed-up, whines then laughs)

certainly not scarce around this here joint...

~Lily
2. January 17th 2007 @ 03:12. David my David Says:
e-NORM-ous,

Your underpant (Undies) poetry is by far my favourite ...

HandsUndies*

sub.

As I write (wetly, might I add ...

David ...
3. January 17th 2007 @ 03:37. Norm Says:
Lily,
mouse code, trying to desiffon the truth from it myself.
It's best to know what you write, I'll get there one day.


David,
HandsUndies?
laughing in undergarments here!
Laughing all the way to the sperm bank.

It needs work.
Norm.
4. January 17th 2007 @ 06:49. David my David Says:
e-NORM-ous ...

Sometimes in our creative writing lives ...

We just move on ... The shit I write that I delete? ... Copiosa Gloriosa Sublima ...

It was Kurt Vonnegut Jr who wrote ... Just be brutal ...

Yep. Piss this one off ... It's not your best work ... but you know that yourself ... I love my filmic genius script-editor mate Duncan ... Guess what he does if he sees something I write he doesn't like?

He gets a big black Textra pen out and writes in BOLD CAPITALISED TEXT:

THIS IS SHIT AND YOU KNOW IT ...

Fuck I love him for that ...

And you? You can take it ... That's why I love sniffing your undies ... *** And shit stirring the 'World' pot? ... ***

More paint splatter and grey matter thanks ... *

David ...

More prose ... less poetry ... Prose is your forte man ...

5. January 17th 2007 @ 06:57. Norm Says:
David,
my poetry makes a good potty.
Something tugs at me to post things i really ought not to.

I'll keep sniffing in places I shouldn't anyway.
Appreciate the brutality of your message.
Feeling a buzz, not literally.

Hats and undies off,
Norm
6. January 17th 2007 @ 07:29. Lily Says:
i don't think you couldn't write a poem Norm...
would you write one, for me?

~Lily
7. January 17th 2007 @ 07:37. Norm Says:
Lily,
verse is what I can't see so well, i think that's what David meant, I can't see verse too well so when I write it it comes across that way a bit, i'm sure....I know what you mean though, I think i do.....in honesty i already have written a few lines for you....You are the Good to others Bad and Fugly....hey I'll think about having another shot...can't say when, i'll let you know when it is delivered....rambling norman
8. January 17th 2007 @ 08:17. Lily Says:
which i can't find to read again -- dammit Janet
just blow the whistle when it arrives...

~Lily
9. January 17th 2007 @ 08:28. DuskDevi Says:
Norm....

You.
Phrased and Fused.

Me.
Crazed and amused.

Dusk
10. January 17th 2007 @ 10:31. Norm Says:
Dusk,
your turn of phrase is better than a saintly full-forward;
hats, undies and socks off to you,
Norm.

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